What do you think of my essay? Romeo and Juliet.?





For my English class we just got done reading Reomo and Juliet, and we have to write a persuassive eassy on who was at fault for the death of Romeo and Juliet. I have only written 2 paragraphs but what do you think of it so far?Romeo and Juliet Essay In the play Romeo and Juliet written by William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet die. There are many people to blame for their death but there are three people in particular that are the cause for this tragic accident. These people are Montague, Capulet, and Friar Lawrence. These people play an important role in the death of Juliet and her Romeo. Capulet. He was the one that pushed Juliet to take drastic measures, in order to save her marriage with Romeo. In act three, scene five, he says "If you act like my daughter, I'll marry you to a my friend. If you don't act like my daughter, you can beg, starve, and die in the streets.......I will never take you back or do anything for you." This means that if she didn't marry Paris, he would disown her and throw her in the streets to die. This made Juliet realize that she somehow had to escape her family and be reunited to Romeo. What do you think? should i add more to my intor.? please help me. Thanks in advance.



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3 Answers to “What do you think of my essay? Romeo and Juliet.?”

  1. flibbertigibbets says:

    “In the play Romeo and Juliet written by William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet die.” – really blunt. provide some background about the story. ex: they fall in love and are separated by a tragic death instead of just “die.” you can’t use that now becasue that would be plagarism, but something like that. getting in trouble for plagerism sucks “These people are Montague, Capulet, and Friar Lawrence. These people play an important role in the death of Juliet and her Romeo.”-instead of saying “Montague” and “Capulet” say “Lord Montague” and “Lord Capulet,” it sounds formal and it identifies who you are talking about because you could be talking about lady montague or lady capulet-combine these two sentences into one, it will flow better”Capulet.”- never start a paragraph with a fragment! write a topic sentence ex: Lord Capulet contributes to…”He was the one that pushed Juliet to take drastic measures, in order to save her marriage with Romeo.”- no comma after measuresyou say “this means” and “this made” alot, try to get rid of the word “this” by rephrasing the sentencethe second paragraph probably needs to be a little longersorry for all the feedback, i hope this helps! i like the idea alot!

  2. reusrup says:

    You wrote yourself that there are three people to blame. You only described the actions of one. Idk how long your essay has to be, but if you can add the actions of the other goons, it would help you exponentially. If not, the I guess it’s a decent paper

  3. gras says:

    Overall, I think the essay is really good, but just make sure that you describe the other two characters that was part of the death of Romeo and Juliet.