Please check Letter to admission office for grammatical errors?





Dear Admission Officers,This week my son learned that he missed your application deadline. He was greatly disappointed because based on the research he made YYYY University has the best business program which suits his goals and needs.Unfortunately, he misinterpreted PVE and Supplementary Essay deadlines which are on April 1 with an actual application deadline which was on February 1. Is there any chance he could still apply to YYYY University?Sincerely,Maria



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One Answer to “Please check Letter to admission office for grammatical errors?”

  1. spunkies says:

    You don’t make research, you do it. Also, I work at a university and I can tell you we are far more impressed if students (rather than their parents) take initiatve. I would suggest you rewrite the letter below to come from him and then send it. I changed the ‘made’ below. For the rest there are no errors as far as I can see. Good luck!Dear Admission Officers,This week my son learned that he missed your application deadline. He was greatly disappointed because based on the research he did, YYYY University has the best business program which suits his goals and needs.Unfortunately, he misinterpreted PVE and Supplementary Essay deadlines which are on April 1 with an actual application deadline which was on February 1.Is there any chance he could still apply to YYYY University?Sincerely,Maria