Good first sentence for my essay?

I have an essay due in a couple of days. My topic is "what is your favorite store?" so i chose forever 21. I need a nice catchy first sentence. I am never good at these "hooks" or whatever. Thanks in advance!

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One Answer to “Good first sentence for my essay?”

  1. gongman says:

    You could start by describing what clothes the store has, and maybe describing the logo. And if the store has a specific smell, you could describe that too. This would make a descriptive hook.