I need someone to proofread this for spelling and grammar!?





I am submitting an application essay to University and I need someone to make sure everything makes sense, with all the necessary conventions. Please check for spelling and grammar, and to see if it is overall appealing and distinctive. Thank you so much. It has to be 300 words, and mine is 295.As an Immigrant to Canada, I was always exuded with changes. A change in culture, environment, a new life; were all profound changes in my life. I am inquisitive of bringing that benevolent change to Queen`s. Queen`s University has always been conducive to a extraordinary education. Peers have always alluded to me that Queen`s offers a myriad of alluring opportunities. My goals at Queen`s are to strive towards and be ambitious to research and intrinsic methods of learning. I anticipate that a comprehensive and an exuberant bachelor`s of Honours Science degree will pertain to my dream of going into Psychiatry. I want Queen`s to be my foundation of providing a foreground to researching and developing new ideas in the field of Psychiatry. Mental health is such a profound and complex issue in today`s society; with myself having personal experience of dealing with mental illness. I feel it is my vocation to gain a remarkable degree to be able to help and research new methods of healing and providing knowledge to people suffering from mental illness. At Queen`s, I want to tackle the issue of mental illness and be able to provide awareness and the chance to make a difference in the lives of so many who never receive the attention they need to such a devastating issue in our society. My industrious and open-minded work ethic will be essential to achieving my goals. I want to leave my distinctive mark while being able to collaborate with all that Queen`s has to offer. Queens` tight knit community with such a diverse culture of people who may share a similar ambition will allow me to be a part of something life-changing; an education that may someday allow me to be the beacon of change in someone`s life.



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One Answer to “I need someone to proofread this for spelling and grammar!?”

  1. keelages says:

    Hi,Since this is quite short, you can find an online spelling and grammar checker and use it to make sure your essay is written correctly. If you search the web, you can find free online software that can correct your grammar and spelling mistakes for you and even five you tips on correct sentence structure. One of my favorite online software for is Ginger. Very user friendly and efficient.