Can someone grade my SAT essay?

Can someone grade my SAT essay giving me a grade out of 12? Thanks a lot, here is my essay:Assignment:Are people today generally too unaware of their good fortune?Essay: People today live such a luxurious life that they are unaware of their good fortune. They take their good fortune for granted and have no gratitude for how fortunate they are. This is shown in the novel ‘Catcher in the Rye’ by J.D. Salinger and from the novel ‘Lord of the Flies.’ From the first novel, ‘Catcher in the Rye,’ the protagonist Holden Caulfield is unaware of how truly fortunate he is. Holden’s family had ample of money for him to spend and to send him to a good school, and yet, Holden is still unhappy. He had roommates and friends to keep him in company, and yet, he spends his day dwelling on how lonely he is instead of feeling thankful that he can live in a perfect environment and embracing the friends that he has. From the second novel, ‘Lord of the Flies,’ the group of ten year old boys admits how they had never appreciated their parents and home enough until they were trapped in an island with no adult supervision. In the first few nights in the island, the boys began to miss their mother’s homemade dinner and their father’s storytelling, something they had always taken for granted. They finally learnt how fortunate they actually were when all their good fortunate was stripped away from them. People today are generally unaware of their good fortune because they are generally too fortunate. They only complain about what they don’t have instead of embracing what they have. Holden felt depressed because he did not have enough friends instead of feeling grateful for the friends that he had. The boys in the island too had complained whey their mothers kissed them goodnight instead of feeling blessed that at that time did have a mother by their side to take care of them. Because people are so pessimist, they are blinded by their misfortunes and cannot see the good things that they have.Thank you :)

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4 Answers to “Can someone grade my SAT essay?”

  1. katwala says:

    I am old and ancient educator, I have two things for you use learned instead of learnt and consider this as you write your next draft “Most peoples problems are self inflicted”, you are very close to that consecpt

  2. semipermeable says:

    I’d say 9+ it’s really good that you used references in your essay.

  3. Percy says:

    I would say “10″ because I think there were a few ‘run on’ sentences in your essay. I would like to let you know that your essay were very persuasive.

  4. undraftable says:

    I would say about an 8. This is a decent essay and you do a good job of staying on topic. However there are a few “run-on” sentences. Another problem is that you need to be a little more careful about the way you word your sentences. To help with that problem you can just quickly reread each sentence as you write it. Then reread each paragraph as you finish it. A helpful hint that I will add in is to write about personal experience instead of books. That way you have more information on the topic. This will help you to be more presuasive because people will believe what has happened in real life but not as much if it’s fiction. Remember it’s not all about presuading your reader on the SAT. However many times trying to be presausive helps to make your essay sound more fluent and demanding of attention (which makes your essay sound more intelligent).Overall pretty good essay. Also congrats on being one of the few people out there any more that care about their school work and future. Good luck with your SAT and if you continue to work hard like this there is no reason to be nervous. You’ll do just fine.