Review my essay about “Different Kinds of Friendships” and please comment your thoughts on it.?





Different Kinds of FriendshipsDuring my twenty years of life, I have met many kinds of different people of all ages and ethnicities. The friendships that I made were all special in their own way. These friends helped mold me into the person that I am today.There is the kind of friend, when going to their home I am always welcome there. We can hang out and talk about anything, I would not have to worry if this friend is the kind who looks for something to hold against me "just in case" something were to happen to our friendship. I have had friends where we meet up at someone else's house and hang out in a group of people, but never just the two of us, it would make me wonder what it would be like to just hang out with that one person; if it would even be enjoyable at all. There are friends that have a lifestyle that I do not agree with, but they might be a great person despite how they live. I am open to diversity, meaning that I do not need everyone to be as I am, so I value the friendships of those that have the same interests as I do. Sometimes I just need someone to talk to and when no one else is around I go to my friends online, they are helpful with words instead of actions; like giving a hug or a shoulder to cry on. When I am having computer problems, I go to my friend who fits into the "geek" category. They know the ins and outs of the technology world and can give me advice or information about new programs to use. I once had a friend who was just like me, in almost every way. We liked the same music, the same television shows. We even dressed like each other and thought a lot alike.A good friend is someone that would help me to be a better person and they would stand by me through the good times and the bad. Telling me how it is instead of what I want to hear. They would watch my back, if they hear someone talking about me, they would not just stand back and let it happen. A good friend to me is someone you share the same interests with, you do not always have to agree, but you do not disown them because you disagreed with something they might have said.The best kind of friendship to me, is a close, strong friendship, the one where the friend is more like a sister or brother, they can come to family gatherings and fit right in with everyone. The friend that I have the most respect for because of what we have been through together.Through all of the experiences I went through with the wide range of lifestyles and views, I grew a great deal. The most important thing that I got out of these friendships is an open mind, each friendship was unique in its own way and will never be the same for another person. In conclusion, I have learned a lot about life, love, and everything that has made me the person that I am now. Each friendship plays an important and unique role in my life.



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One Answer to “Review my essay about “Different Kinds of Friendships” and please comment your thoughts on it.?”

  1. azarbod says:

    you have some grammar problems. some sentences aren’t actually complete sentences (the one beginning with ‘a good friend’ for example)”They would watch my back, if they hear.” is not a complete sentence nor does it make sense. many if not most of your sentences have grammatical problems. run it thru a grammar check. you have some agreement issues (grammar). the ideas are good but you have to use complete sentences and correct grammar.