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In my essay, I will discuss three romantic poems and three victorian poems we read and compare and contrast them. I will also discuss how each poem is representative of the period that produced it. The romantic period was between 1785-1830 and by far the shortest as any other period in British literary history. The victorian Age was between 1830-1901 and the literature was produced during the reign of Queen Victoria (1837-1901) and corresponds to the Victoria era. It also forms a link and transition between the writers of the romantic period and the very different literature of the 20th century. Although there are similarities and differences among romantic and victorian poems, history has proven that poems are written, edited, and produced in similar ways.



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15 Answers to “How is my paragraph? Please edit it if needed. 10 points to first person who answers.?”

  1. emlynne says:

    NEVER start your essay with the sentence, “In my essay…” or, “My essay talks about…”. teachers hate that

  2. macroscopically says:

    It is great it does not need to be edited i think it is perfect.hands down perfect.but just to make sure you should check for spelling errors and punctuation.oh and capitalization mistakes.do i get best answer i was the first person to answer.

  3. garroter says:

    Its good, the spelling is okay but for grammar I am not so sure, I am not great at grammar. However, here are some tipsFor an essay you need the following frameworkIntro: Say what you are going to sayBody: Say itConclusion: Say what has been saidMake sure that your word count is appropriate and follow the format i use, or tweak it to your liking.Intro: 20% of total word countBody:60% 20% for each paragraph (3 paragraphs with different positions/angles/ideas)Conclusion: 20%

  4. browndj says:

    In my essay, I will discuss three romantic poems and three victorian poems we read and compare and contrast them. I will also discuss how each poem is representative of the period that produced it. The romantic period was between 1785-1830 and by far the shortest as any other period in British literary history. The victorian Age was between 1830-1901 and the literature was produced during the reign of Queen Victoria (1837-1901) and corresponds to the Victoria era. It also forms a link and transition between the writers of the romantic period and the very different literature of the 20th century. Although there are similarities and differences among romantic and victorian poems, history has proven that poems are written, edited, and produced in similar ways. I think thats absolutely fine. Ive read it over twice and run it through my spelling and grammar checker! Good job !

  5. hypochondrias says:

    You shouldn’t use “I” in an essay. Essays are never supposed to be personal. Try to avoid any personal pronouns like “we”, “you”, and “us”

  6. jedidah says:

    It’s very good.i dont think there is any editing to do

  7. jettyhead says:

    looks fine to me. microsoft word should help u if not

  8. macromerite says:

    Very good, but you need to capitalize some important names, like The Victorian Age. You also spelled region wrong. But other than that, you have a good paragraph.

  9. domitic says:

    Looks great to me. I don’t see any mistakes either. You’re good.

  10. apostolate says:

    In my essay, I will discuss three romantic poems and three Victorian poems we read and compare and contrast them. I will also discuss how each poem is representative of the period that produced it. The romantic period was between 1785 and 1830. It was the shortest as any other period in British literary history. The Victorian Age was between 1830 and 1901 and the literature was produced during the reign of Queen Victoria (1837 to 1901) and corresponds to the Victoria era. It also forms a link and transition between the writers of the romantic period and the very different literature of the 20th century. Although there are similarities and differences among romantic and Victorian poems, history has proven that poems are written, edited, and produced in similar ways.

  11. avshar says:

    Here I will discuss three romantic poems and three victorian poems we read and compare and contrast them. I will also discuss how each poem is representative of the period that produced it. The romantic period was between 1785-1830 and was, by far, the shortest as any other period in British literary history. The victorian Age was between 1830-1901 and the literature was produced during the reign of Queen Victoria (1837-1901) and corresponds to the Victoria era. It also forms a transition between the writers of the romantic period and the very different literature of the 20th century. Although there are similarities and differences among romantic and victorian poems, history has proven that poems are written, and produced in similar ways.

  12. averrer says:

    Whoooa… Very well written. I could see the connection very clearly. Your thesis is pretty good.I’d say you’ll at least get an A.For me 4/4.

  13. patronizable says:

    yawn

  14. incendiarism says:

    i think its realy gud 10/10

  15. indemnificator says:

    Sounds good, punctuation all looks correct as well. Good job.