Can you please correct my essay for me?





Hi so i have to a essay to do on animal farm but can you please correct it if you can. Thank you.And the topic is....George Orwell's other famous book is 1984, which details the life of Winston Smith, a government employee whose job it is to revise documents that paint the leadership in a negative light. Orwell was obviously very concerned that history could be re-written by those in power. How do the pigs in ANIMAL FARM "change history"? Think specifically of the seven Commandments, the way snowball is made into a villain, and events (boxer's fate, the windmill, timber negotiations) that could serve as the basis for body paragraphs with similar ideas. Possible "so whats?": In today's electronic world, should society be concerned with an accurate representaition of history? Where is history stored? How is it Passed down? Who detemines the "official" version of history?Animal Farm Essay Animal Farm is a book about animals that represent real life people during the USSR, or also known as Union of Soviet Socialist Republics or Soviet Union. Animal Farm is written by George Orwell, who wrote another famous book called nineteen-eighty four. In the book Animal Farm some interpretation of characters are: Napoleon - Joseph Stalin, Snowball – Leo Trotsky, Squealer – Russia Media, Old Major – Karl Marx, Dogs – Military or police. The Time of the Soviet Union was really cruel. In Animal farm all the animals didn't have any freedom because Mr. Jones was going to harsh on them. Snowball had made The Seven Commandments. They read 1. Whatever goes upon two legs is an enemy. 2. Whatever goes upon four legs, or has wings, is a friend. 3. No animal shall wear clothes. 4. No animal shall sleep in a bed. 5. No animal shall drink alcohol. 6. No animal shall kill any other animal. 7. All animals are equal. When Napoleon and Snowball take over for Old Major, they kick Mr. Jones (Nicholas II) out of Animal Farm. The animals were free for ever, or as they thought they were. Then later Napoleon drives Snowball out as well. So Napoleon takes over. When Napoleon takes over he slowly turns into a villain. He changes the whole farm. He properly is more cruel to the animals than Mr. Jones, but the animals still thought they were free. One time the pigs started to sleep in the beds. Then the animals on the farm checked the list that had the commandments rule 4 read as … No animal shall sleep in a bed with sheets. Later they started to drink alcohol, where in the fifth commandment it states No animal shall drink alcohol. Then the animals checked the list again and now it states "No animal shall drink alcohol without excess", and they believed it again. Later all of the pigs started to walk on their feet only, that means they were turning into humans. The sheep used to say four legs good, two legs bad, now they say four legs good, two legs better. Napoleon had the animals work for so long on the windmill for heat and electricity. Then later he decided to use it for food. Some how Napoleon was apple to afford a lot of whiskey. The animals had a hard time figuring out how Napoleon got the money. Boxer (working class) is a horse that works so hard. Then one time he gets hurt really bad. Then Napoleon tells to boxer that he will send Boxer to the hospital, but the cruel napoleon actually sold him to a butcher. So that is the way he got the money for the whiskey. At the end the humans and the pigs were cheating in a card game and started fighting.I know i am still missing the cunclusion.



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One Answer to “Can you please correct my essay for me?”

  1. retrocedent says:

    I suggest you correct it at english learning forum or use english correction software.