How can i change this thesis in a comparative essay? really need help?

my teacher said to change my thesis a little because it sounds more like an observation than an actual thesis. Can someone read it and make it better? please. i have spent a day trying to fix it but i thesis:"In both novels, symbols such as cities and homes are used to set a specific mood in relation to the people of Savannah and St.Petersburg to emphasize the outcome of death and it's moral implications."it has to illustrate the truth about the HUMAN CONDITION. please help. thank-you.

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One Answer to “How can i change this thesis in a comparative essay? really need help?”

  1. tubuli says:

    Cities and homes are symbols used to set very specific moods in both Savannah and St. Petersburg, emphasizing the outcome of death and it’s moral implications.