Can someone please edit my essay on importance of human relationships and social work?





Just as individuals have basic human needs to function, relationships provide individuals with emotional, security, physical, social and educational needs. The family is the primary source of support for individuals when they deal with problems in their everyday lives. Some families have outside and financial resources to help them with their problems, while many others do not.Often times, when problems arise in a family or with a relationship arise, it is from a lack of communication or listening. Social workers see the family unit as the basis for human growth and development, as well as giving support. They engage families in the helping process which can help individuals change.The family must be supported and strengthened because it is essential and contributes to our well-being. Above all, our family relationships enables us to learn from each other, develop and grow and live more productive and meaningful lives.



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4 Answers to “Can someone please edit my essay on importance of human relationships and social work?”

  1. pilgrimize says:

    Observation, the family as a unit are not going to be primary to assessment, a good percentage of your cases are going to be with single parents or families with intermittent contact with father, or replacement step parent. Don’t focus your argument on family unity. Your analysis should not be restricted to the “normal” family collective you will rarely see it, refocus on what ever structure is in place, sees their fundamental role as one that places the child first, whether that be a single mum, grandparent etc. Hope this helps.

  2. postnodular says:

    You write: “Often times, when problems arise in a family or with a relationship arise…”would be better written as “Often times, when problems arise in a family or relationship…” It is less awkward. Other than that, there is a lot of truth to what you’ve written so far, except that not everyone has a family or a salvageable family situation, due to abuse or what not. People who are unlucky enough to have been raised in foster care or otherwise have no family must somehow forge a family-like situation on their own. In this self-centered and egomaniac world, this is often difficult because most people are out for themselves. You could expand your essay to include a sense of community or friendships where a family unit is absent.

  3. synizesis says:

    1. Often times, when problems arise in a family or with a relationship arise, it is from a lack of communication or listening.- change toOn many occasions problems arise within a family or a relationship from a lack of communication or listening2. new paragraph at “social workers” sentence3.”They engage families in the helping process which can help individuals change” — EXPAND! and perhaps explain in more detail4. “Above all, our family relationships enables us to learn from each other, develop and grow and live more productive and meaningful lives.”perhaps expand it further and change above all to ” Most importantly.perhaps include a conclusionim 16 and am no english teacher but this is how i would change it. take in mind that i am english and the americans do have different types of structures.

  4. precent says:

    I will put the bits I edited in all caps. Keep the edits you like; tweak or eliminate the others. Just as individuals have basic BIOLOGICAL needs THEY HAVE TO SATISFY IN ORDER to function, relationships ARE ALSO VITAL TO SATISFY THEIR emotional, security, physical, social and educational needs. The family is the primary source of support for individuals when they deal with problems in their everyday lives. Some families have EXTERNAL and financial resources to help them with their problems, while many others do not.Often times, when problems arise in a family or ANY OTHER relationship, it is from a lack of communication or listening. Social workers see the family unit as the basis for human growth and development, as well as FOR giving support. They engage families in A process which can help individuals change.The family must be supported and strengthened because it is essential and contributes to our well-being. Above all, our family relationships enable* us to learn from each other, develop and grow, and live more productive and meaningful lives.