I need a GOOD thesis statement before this friday 10/29/10?!?!?

I need a statement that is based on this:• Do I answer the question? Re-reading the question prompt after constructing a working thesis can help you fix an argument that misses the focus of the question. • Have I taken a position that others might challenge or oppose?If your thesis simply states facts that no one would, or even could, disagree with, it's possible that you are simply providing a summary, rather than making an argument.• Is my thesis statement specific enough?Thesis statements that are too vague often do not have a strong argument. If your thesis contains words like "good" or "successful," see if you could be more specific: why is something "good"; what specifically makes something "successful"? • Does my thesis pass the "So what?" test? If a reader's first response is, "So what?" then you need to clarify, to forge a relationship, or to connect to a larger issue.• Does my essay support my thesis specifically and without wandering? If your thesis and the body of your essay do not seem to go together, one of them has to change. It's o.k. to change your working thesis to reflect things you have figured out in the course of writing your paper. Remember, always reassess and revise your writing as necessary.• Does my thesis pass the "how and why?" test? If a reader's first response is "how?" or "why?" your thesis may be too open-ended and lack guidance for the reader. See what you can add to give the reader a better take on your position right from the beginning.By the way it has to be about Thomas Jefferson, I don't care what part of his life. I would prefer the declaration of independence or the minister to france. Thank you guys so much. I would be really grateful.

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One Answer to “I need a GOOD thesis statement before this friday 10/29/10?!?!?”

  1. indicatrix says:

    Here’s my favorites!”An All-Knowing (Omniscient) God is Evil that needs a hell to put the souls He purposely creates knowing beforehand He is going to damn.” “An God that needs “Judgement Day” is stupid as He needs to wait until AFTER death to know if He got it right because it takes ignorance to “judge” for without ignorance, there is nothing left over to judge, just pass sentence. Therefore, judgement day comes BEFORE life, not after.”" An Omniscient God does not need a Jesus as He learns nothing, much less learns nothing on judgement day that He didn’t already know on the day He created the Soul.”"Judgement: The act of gleening what you DON’T know from what you do…what is it an Omniscient God learns on judgement day that He didn’t already know on the Day-of-Birth?”