I need help to jazz up and make this essay sound better?





I am talking about how Romeo is to blame for the death Juliet and himself.I needed help making this essay sound better.Romeo did not gather enough information when finding out about Juliet’s death. Romeo was blinded by his own love when noticing Juliet’s face in the tomb, "Thou art not conquered. Beauty’s ensign yet/ Is crimson in thy lips and in thy cheeks/ And death's pale flag is not advanced there" (V.iii.94-96). Romeo decided not to obey his banishment and this led to him not getting the letter from Friar John which was delayed. Again Romeo’s impulsive behavior led him to trusting Balthazar blindly without meeting Friar Lawrence about this situation. He acted naïve about this situation not thinking about future troubles.



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One Answer to “I need help to jazz up and make this essay sound better?”

  1. intelligencer says:

    dont use the term jazz up and youl be good