Can someone help me with my essay? (please)?

I've been having trouble writing more for the last paragraph. And I was wondering if someone could help me figure out what I could write, to make it longer. Or does it even need to be longer? I don't know.. but can you please tell me what you think? (Oh and it's a character sketch essay by the way)Hermione Granger in Harry Potter is the smart-allaic, "know-it-all" wizard of the "best friend" trio. She has brown bushy hair, brown eyes; and likes to study "spells" more than anyof her friends. She tends to be quick on her feet if one of her friends is in trouble.As she grows up through-out the series, she becomes less interested in her studies. And hangs out with her friends more, but she still loves to study and do school work more than anything. She can act scared at some points though, when she was in the dark forest with Harry he comforted her when she felt scared. So she can feel vulnerable at times, which I think is one characteristics people like about Hermione. She focuses on school, but she can be sweet when she wants to be.Out of the trio, (Harry, Hermione, and Ron), I think she is one of the more favorited characters because she is kind, and helpful to her friends.And sorry for the weird spacing, yahoo wouldn't let me fix it (boo) :(

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2 Answers to “Can someone help me with my essay? (please)?”

  1. housemaster says:

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  2. thumb's says:

    Here is something I came up with.During her years at Hogwarts, Hermione Granger could often be found in the third floor library, flipping through thick, dusty volumes. Though easily recognizable by her bushy brown hair and large front teeth, Hermione was famous for her even bigger brain. Known as the brightest witch of her generation, the only school mandated activity she didn’t excel in was Flying. Her love for books and education was matched only by her kindness to others and her loyalty to her friends. Even though Hermione is acrophobic, she is known to fly on Thestrals and Dragons when her friends need her, or even throw Harry Potter and herself out of second floor window to save his life. What makes Hermione even more special than any other character in the series is the fact that she has made greater impact on our society than most of us realize. She authorized the brainiacs to wear demeaning tiles with pride as if handed a badge of honor. To this day and long after we are gone, Hermione will continue to be a hero of the intellectuals and a role model for many young girls.The reference to her kindness could be supported by her S.P.E.W efforts. You may also want to talk about her character development. Two of her quotes capture her progress perfectly. Halfway through book 1: “Now, if you two don’t mind, I’m going to bed before either of you come up with another clever idea to get us killed… or worst, expelled!”Later on, towards the end of book 1: “Books! And Cleverness! There are more important things – friendship and bravery…”You can see how her character develops through the first book. Her development throughout the series mirrors this, just in a bigger scale.