Is this a good introduction/thesis statement for an argumentative essay?!?





I'm writing an argumentative essay about plus size models and how they should not have the title "plus size"... give me feed back..thanksThere is a problem with the term "plus size." The average woman in America is the size 12-14 which is considered the size of a "plus size" model. That size is considered Average Size. Therefore, the models should be called average size models. They should be just a part of the collective of all models. They should be free to be the size they are naturally, not be forced to gain or loose weight, because a designer or agency wants them to, they should be defined by their attitude and their overall look, not their size or weight. Women should be free to feel beautiful in their own skin. Weight does not define who a person is or how beautiful they are and all women of all shapes and sizes are beautiful. A model of larger weight should not be subjected to the title of being known as a "plus size" model.



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One Answer to “Is this a good introduction/thesis statement for an argumentative essay?!?”

  1. meningosis says:

    There is a problem with the term “plus size.” Average women in America are sizes 12-14, which is considered the size of a “plus size” model. That size is considered Average Size. Therefore, the models should be called average size models. They should be just a part of the collective of all models. They should be free to be the size they are naturally, not be forced to gain or loose weight, because a designer or agency wants them to. They should be defined by their attitude and their overall look, not their size or weight. Women should be free to feel beautiful in their own skin. Weight does not define who a person is or how beautiful they are and all women of all shapes and sizes are beautiful. A model of larger weight should not be subjected to the title of being known as a “plus size” model.—-Nice, I made a few corrections, I look forward to seeing the finished product:)