Check My Intro Please!?





It is to kill a mockingbird essay."Mockingbirds don't do one thing but... sing their hearts out for us. That's why it's a sin to kill a mockingbird" (90). In a sociaty filled with prejudice, many people's innoce and, sometimes, life is lost due to a cruel sociaty filled with false courage, ignorance, and shallow pride. In Harper Lee's TkaM the mockingbird symbolizes the victims of intolerance and prejududice.TYVM!



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6 Answers to “Check My Intro Please!?”

  1. Strombidae says:

    society is spelled incorrectly. many and people’s doesn’t really agree. Instead of many maybe you could use often. Like: often, a person’s life is lost due to a cruel………(blah blah blah so on and so forth) You need a comma after: In Harper Lee’s TkaM. Otherwise it’s pretty good. The second sentence just needs a little bit of work- it’s a bit confusing with the people’s and many. And then you also have many and then life is. That doesn’t work either. You keep switching between plural and singular.

  2. homaloidal says:

    I think it is good!

  3. Mononchus says:

    it sounds like really good

  4. weyandt says:

    Your Intro is below- I would suggest writing another sentence or two, to make it stronger. Most teachers look for three to five sentences to make a good intro. Also, watch for those run-ons and check your spelling. I’ve checked the spelling and re-worded some of it (sort of like editing it) for you, to make it appear stronger. I hope it helps, and if you want to, I can help you edit the rest =). I love doing it, so if you need help feel free to ask! Here it is:”Mockingbirds don’t do one thing but… sing their hearts out for us. That’s why it’s a sin to kill a mockingbird” (90). In a society filled with prejudice, many people’s innocence and, in some cases, their lives, are lost due to an ignorant society filled with a false sense of courage, and shallow pride. In Harper Lee’s TkaM, the mockingbird symbolizes the victims of intolerance and prejudice.Maybe after that you could add something about society not being ready to accept them as individuals, or something about not accepting people who walk off the beaten path.

  5. studiousness says:

    okay so imma revise it for yaThe novel (underline the title) To Kill A Mockingbird showed numerous of characters who lost their innocence by the evil of society. “Mockingbirds don’t do one thing but…sing their hearts out for us. That’s why it’s a sin to kill a mockingbird” (Lee 90). The mockingbird is a strong symbol of innocence which is lost in the society filled with prejudice, false courage, ignorance, and shallow pride. As Harper Lee shown throughout the novel, the mocking bird is proven to be the symbol of the victims’ intolerance and prejudice.

  6. huddlingly says:

    i think it should be a little longer but other than that it’s good, you need at least 3 sentences for a strong intro