Question on “what i learned” on personal essay?





I'm writing an essay on "what i learned from this experience".I'm using three experiences:-when i tried to be mary poppins-when i tried to collect bird wings to fly-when i glued my hands to the ceilingi'm not sure if i really learned anything from these experiences, though.something about imagination?or curiousity?i need some help :/haha



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2 Answers to “Question on “what i learned” on personal essay?”

  1. semicircumferentor says:

    don’t use experiences because they’re amusing or funny. if the assignment is about what you’ve learned, think of times in your life when you actually learned a lot. what you have right now is a weak fit, and it will make for a weak paper.

  2. microlith says:

    Uh, you didn’t learn that gluing your hands to the ceiling (for instance) was an extremely stupid thing to do?If you didn’t learn anything from those experiences, why did you choose them?