I need some help on my last paragraph?





"Finally, women have more emotion, sensibility, and insight than men do. If you haven’t noticed, it is easier to talk intimately to women than to men no matter what gender you are. Men just don’t find it comfortable to talk intimately, especially to the same gender." this gonna be the 4th paragraph of the essay. however, this paragraph is too short and i have no idea what to write any more. how would you continue the paragraph, any hints?



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One Answer to “I need some help on my last paragraph?”

  1. Sea-Tac says:

    You could use some statistics or polls if you could find any.You could use a quote by a famous person.You could use scientific facts about the male and female brain/ hormones.