How to make a good concluding paragraph to my essay?





I am doing an essay, and i always have trouble with making a GOOD concluding paragraph. Can you help me its do tomorrow. Here's my introduction paragraph:"Students should not be forced to wear uniforms. Wearing what you want helps someone express who they are and defines each personality. For students who do not wear uniforms, they are able to express their individuality. Uniforms can also be very costly for students who cannot afford to buy them. In addition uniforms can make students feel uncomfortable."Also I know my thesis is a little bad and not too good, so if you can help me on that it can really help a lot, Also Im not asking for you to write out a whole paragraph for my conclusion, just like one or two sentences to help start me off.Thanks!



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2 Answers to “How to make a good concluding paragraph to my essay?”

  1. eburnated says:

    In conclusion, students should not be forced to wear uniforms. they should not be forced to wear uniforms because wearing what you want helps someone express who they are and defines each personality. Uniforms also can be very expensive for students who cannot afford to buy them. As you can see, childrens should not be forced to wear uniforms because… (state why they should not be forced to wear a uniform)i hope i helped!

  2. canisiana says:

    In conclusion, i dim it fit to express my gesture, that putting on and expressing what is in you makes you to be yourself, and you will be ready to learn more under a conjusive atmosphere