Help edit my essay please URGENT!?





WELL SOMEONE JUST EDIDTED IT FOR ME , BUT I JUST WANNA DOUBLE CHECK. I NEED A GOOD PLOT AND A THESIS AND MAKE SURE THAT I HAVE THREE GENERAL EXAMPLES STATING THAT ROMEO IS PERSISTANT THANKS FOR TAKING YOUR TIME, TO DO ME THIS FAVOR I HAVE HORRIBLE GRAMMAR In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet; Romeo is a very persistent young man who does everything to be with his true love Juliet. At the beginning of the story, Romeo was convinced he loved Rosaline, but soon realized that Juliet was the one he truly loved. One day Romeo and his friends decided to attend a Capulet masquerade party, uninvited, but there he discovered a beautiful young lady, Juliet. He also learned Juliet, was a Capulet. That was a problem because Romeo was a Montague, and both the Montague’s and the Capulets have been involved in an ancient feud. But that certainly did not stop Romeo, because he loved Juliet and he was an eager young man. Like for example; he persisted on talking to her, and kissing her, "0, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do" (60)! After the party he was more than eager to see her. As soon as his friends and he left the party, he set out to look for his new love, Juliet, at the Capulet garden to propose his love to her, "Call me but love and I’ll be new baptized; henceforth I never will be Romeo" (74). Romeo had completely forgotten about Rosaline, the woman he most recently loved, as soon as he met Juliet. Romeo had also agreed on marrying Juliet just as she planned. Romeo could no longer wait to marry Juliet, so he visited Friar Laurence. Romeo begged Friar Laurence to marry the two, "We met, we wooed, and made exchange of vow, I'll tell thee as we pass; but this I pray, that thou consent to marry us to-day" (84). Friar Laurence happily agreed to marry the two lovers, and that was all a result of Romeos' passion to marry Juliet. Throughout the story, Romeo had gone through a lot just to be with Juliet. For example, the time he wanted to talk to her, the time he hides in her garden, and the time he proposed to marriage to her.



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2 Answers to “Help edit my essay please URGENT!?”

  1. linas says:

    1.there shouldnt be a semi colon in the first sentence…it should be a comma after “In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet (comma-not semi colon).2. after “true love”, there should be a comma between true love and Juliet.3. always speak in present tense when talking about a book in a paper. like- “at the beginning of the story, romeo IS-(not was) convinced he loved Rosaline” so u gotta go through the paper and change that.4. this should read like this “One day romeo and his friends decide to attend a capulet masquearade party they were not invited to. this is where romeo discovers a beautiful woman named juliet”5. dont start the sentence with “but.” should just read “this did not stop romeo…”6. dont say “like for example”. just say “for example”7. u dont sight a page when sighting shakespeare…sight the act and line…so if something was in act 2 line 12, u would sight it by writing 2.128. this sentence should read like this…”once romeo met juliet, he completely forgetten about the woman he previously loved, rosaline” instead of the way it presently is.

  2. sinon's says:

    In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet, Romeo is a very persistent young man who does everything to be with his true love, Juliet. At the beginning of the story, Romeo is convinced he loved Rosaline, but soon realized that Juliet was the one he truly loved. One day Romeo and his friends decided to attend a Capulet masquerade party, uninvited, but there he discovered a beautiful young lady, Juliet. He also learned Juliet was a Capulet. That was a problem because Romeo was a Montague. Both Montague and Capulets have had a ongoing ancient feud. Though, that mere obstacle certainly did not stop Romeo, because his dear love for Juliet. Like for example; he persisted on talking to her, and kissing her. For example in this scene his lines were: “0, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do” (60)! After the party he was more than eager to see her. As soon as Romeo and his friends left the party, he set out to look for his new love, Juliet. To climb the garden wall to propose his love for her. As his lines were: “Call me but love and I’ll be new baptized; henceforth I never will be Romeo” (74). Romeo had completely forgotten about Rosaline, the woman he most recently loved, as soon as he met Juliet. Romeo had also proposed marriage to Juliet just as she planned. Romeo could no longer be patient to marry Juliet, so he visited Friar Laurence. Romeo begged Friar Laurence to wed the two, stated in this line: “We met, we wooed, and made exchange of vow, I’ll tell thee as we pass; but this I pray, that thou consent to marry us to-day” (84). Friar Laurence happily agreed to marry the two lovers, and that was all a result of Romeos’ passion for Juliet. Throughout the story, Romeo had gone through many obstacles just to be with Juliet. For example, the time he wanted to talk to her, the time he hides in her garden, and the time he proposed marriage to her.