Is this a thesis statement? I need a good mark for this essay.?





The main character of "The Flash" and "The Night Face Up" loses their true realities and therefore became lost to the opposite worlds presented to them in the end. (skip 1. and 2. if you want)1.The flash is about a guy who finds out about the knowledge of nothingness and that everything doesn't fit together until someone reminded him that everything was normal and everything did fit together. In the end he hope to remember that new found knowledge.2.The night face up is about an unidentified character who lives in two opposite worlds. The first world has order and the other is anarchy. In the beginning he is in the order world but as he sleep he "dreams" about the anarchy world. In the end He loses his grip on the order world and finds that he is actually awake in the anarchy world and that the order world may have been a dream. It is unknown as of which is the real realities.Sorry if it is not descriptive enough but i can't really write the whole story out.I'm doing a text to text essay and i really need to do good. I have about 4 hour to do this once i start but right now i'm trying to get ready.*i got work and tomorrow the due date* right now im relating the two stories while also using the existentialism term in the essay.Is there any way i can improve my statement?Why would this thesis statement bad if so?also while your add it what makes a good essay?



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2 Answers to “Is this a thesis statement? I need a good mark for this essay.?”

  1. asperite says:

    You’ve got some grammar problems: you’re switching between singular and plural characters and between past and present tenses. It’s either “The main character … loses his true reality … presented to him,” “The main characters … lose their true realities … presented to them,” “The main character … lost his true reality … presented to him,” or “The main characters … lost their true realities … presented to them.” Do the 2 stories have the same main character? Or are there 2 main characters, one for each of the 2 stories?) And it’s either “loses … becomes,” “lose … become,” or “lost … became.” I would probably go with the present tense, unless your teacher or professor has told you otherwise.Other than that, I think it sounds good. I’m not familiar with the stories in question, so I can’t comment on how well I think you can support the thesis, but it is the sort of thesis you can provide evidence for, and it looks interesting to me.

  2. ahab says:

    This is a thesis statement./