Is this a well written paragraph…?





I just finished writing the third body paragraph for my comparative essay (on family life in two books), and I wanted to know if it was well written. If you see any mistakes (tense issues, sentence structure, grammar, etc). Any help would be greatly appreciated (sorry I couldn't paste it here, Y!A said it wouldn't fit:3rd Body: [external link]



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One Answer to “Is this a well written paragraph…?”

  1. ruthy says:

    Your paragraph above is grammatically correct, but the link you provided came back saying that the image I am looking for has been deleted. Perhaps you should delete your question also.Good luck.