Asks Tagged ‘intro.?’

This is my intro paragraph for my essay? help?

this is the intro to my essay on child labor. its a rough draft and i am basically trying to say what child labor is doing to our future and social world ( children not having education or childhood) continuing the pattern of labor for low wages etc.. my main points are: dehuminization, lack of […]

Advise on intro paragrapgh!?

can you please read this and tell me if this is a good intro paragraph on a persuasive essay im doing about curfews. (im for it) and please also the punctuation and if it makes sense. thanks alott for those who help me!” Is setting a curfew for teens a form of punishment or is […]

Is this a good intro paragraph?

I need help with my Rutgers University essay. Is this a good introduction? Here’s the prompt:Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural […]

Good intro to essay about palestine?

hey im doing a project about palestine and its cultures,traditions,economy famous land marks etc. so i need a good intro to an essay about this stuff and if u can include anything u know about their cultures,traditions,economy famous land marks etc tht would be great thx ahead of time

Is this too long of an intro paragraph?

also could you give your opinion on it. its an introduction to a descriptive essay i am writing but im afraid its too long. For the majority of people, rafting for the first time is quite an exhilarating experience. For me, unfortunately, this was not the case. That first time, everything started out great. The […]

Read my persuasive essay intro? PLEASE!?

According to Amy Lowell, “For books are more than books, they are the life, the very heart and core of ages past, the reason why men lived and worked and died, the essence and quintessence of their lives.” Books can do what nothing else can. They can empower us, take us where we’ve never let […]

Intro for my college essay?

I have to write an essay on this topic, can anyone edit this intro or tell me suggestions and such?The development of gender in the child “It’s a boy!” The doctor may shout. “You can’t wear blue! Only boys can wear blue, you’re a girl!” A young boy might say to his classmate. “Boys don’t […]

Does this sound like a good intro for my si-fi essay for my 8th grade English class?

The years was 2152. Scientist had made a huge breakthrough. They had invented an airfilter which worked much like a tree. Little did they know, it was very dangerous

Check My Intro Please!?

It is to kill a mockingbird essay.”Mockingbirds don’t do one thing but… sing their hearts out for us. That’s why it’s a sin to kill a mockingbird” (90). In a sociaty filled with prejudice, many people’s innoce and, sometimes, life is lost due to a cruel sociaty filled with false courage, ignorance, and shallow pride. […]

Harry Potter Persuasive essay intro?

Ok… so i have to do a persuasive essay on whether i think the Harry Potter movies are better than the books, I agree that the movies are better than the books… BUT i really badly need help starting my essay! Here is what i have got… “Millions of children around the world enjoy sitting […]